21 June 2005

         shifting
        viewpoint
          a step to the left
on this form
      shifted
          whereas
         to the
          right
    now take a step

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  1. Anonymous21/6/05 19:52

    The least expected
    New movement
    Renewing
    Now
    Consciouseness
    Traceless
    Forwards
    Nothing
    Really

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  2. taiji heartwork22/6/05 08:15

    Ah ha! But this ain't a mesostic. You've caught the 9 lines though.
    I still consider this shifting / viewpoint poem my best ever. The rhythms are really sexy. Has to be seen on the page really - the straight left edge spoils mesostics. If anyone knows how to to variable left indents with JavaScript then let me know.

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